(one of the rare moments when WE smile at something .....TOGETHER)Age is just a double digit...
so don judge me by digits and numbers
stop telling me to grow up
when all i want is to grow younger,
younger at heart and in the head
in body, i know i cant help!!!!
I know,it exists
exists in my smile
coz i feel a lot older
on days I can't....
people who(really) know me, say
I'm growing wackier ..wonkier...FUNNIER
by the moment..by the year
and i feel even younger when I hear that !!!
I pretend to ignore the fine lines
that I see in the mirror
I can only see my smile there
coz thats the only thing I know
that looks best on me.
age is just a number...
I have stopped counting
I'm bad at maths anyway
I hope you are too.
(no it's not my birthday ,but amateur attempts at poetry should be......appreciated,commented and tolerated)
current reason to smile.....
"Delhi here I come..."
21 comments:
Hi Gazal,
You know you're getting old when the candles cost more than the cake. So I guess on that note you are YOUNG!
Have a great vacation.
Cheers,
Salil
its not your budday??? happy budday anyway!
all the facial muscles working there!
hey gazal..
have a rocking trip in Delhi!! :-))
cheers
padma
poetry totally appreciated....
and you going to delhi...have a freaking good time...:D
do try the chaats,
age is just a number
I am bad at maths anyway
LOL!!! Very nice
age is just a double digit - yup, u r right. some nice lines there :) happy holidays...
enjoy....these lines are so cute....and age be damned!!!
oh!! This is nice poetry Gazal.. and i m not just appreciating ur effort..Thumbs Up!
@salil
lol.
@satish
as long as it doesnt increase my age
@brocas
lol
@padma
i know what you are thinking...you devil
@suma
as if i needed the reminder.
@parul
I miss you everytime i come to delhi.
@xh
thanks buddy
@prats
and you don have to worry at all..lol
@how do we
thanks a ton.
That was lovely! And you say its "Amateur attempt at poetry?" you are kidding. Right?
And yay!! Coming to Delhi??!! I have to HAVE to meet you. Write to me at doiwrite@gmail.com and tell me about your program
Now thats like a good girl. I dunno how i missed this post. You should yell like me, "check my post."
The poem is really good. Try more. And the idea behind the poem is appreciated. And the photographs that show you smiling ARE in fact wonderful. At least I never thought of age.
Love you.
And Since you have volunteered to do the tag sharafat sey, I am linking you immediately lest you should change your mind.
YOU STAND TAGGED.
loved the lines
I can only see my smile there
coz thats the only thing I know
that looks best on me.
You are flying to Delhi? Enjoy your trip!!
@nm
the plesure was all mine.
@mampi
lol.Your command is my wish before you utter it.
@veena
thank you.
@joy
yes.thanks
lovely smile and if the reason is Delhi, my beloved city then all the more reason for it to be appreciated....Hope you have a wonderful time here. :)
hey there!
its been ages! loved your poem! i stopped counting after 20 or something myself :P
so when are you back from delhi?
hope to hear from you soon!
Happened to stumble on this...great one!Made me smile on this grim Monday morning. Well you know what those littl elines that seems to multiply everyear, when you look in the mirror, people call it wronkles...I like to call it my Calligraphy practice by God...well come on he must get bored too right!And so he choses the best canvas;-)oh/..well...who am I kiddin...never mind!Good one..keep it up..!
typos: little lines, wrinkles;-)
@pinku
yes...the reason is correct.
thanks for dropping by
@guruji...
how have you been?
at 20..i tot you would say 18.
@anju
glad it cheered you up.thanks for dropping by.
enjoyed it and could well relate to it. a heart warming endearing one! :)
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